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Blackclaw X Rigidedge

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Point commission for =MisterTwister123
Also a remake of:
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Ugggh my mouse jacked up during this.

Whelp, this took a while o_o
From 9:00 to about 12:00

Oh, also, I tried a knew shading technique. Let me know how you like it.

Hope you like it Twister and Blackout. Please comment before fav-ing.
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Characters: Rigidedge =MisterTwister123 © Blackclaw =Blackclawxx ©
Artist: Me ©
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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Fur bangs and anime eyes. Typical warrior cat drawing. Yet you are improving. You have some of th criterias of a cat right. The grey fur on the black cat's chest is all patched up. Add some more texture to it, dont overdo it. There is some pink on the brown cat's ear ._. You do perfect blushing but remove the lines. Lower the fur variety on the side of the cat's face so it can look more realistic. Um. About the whiskers. If you want it to be more cute. Please move the whiskers where a real cat's whiskers are supposed to be instead of leaving it lying in mid-air. The white you drew on the cats' fur bangs is kind of sloppy. But extend it to show more value. The fur hanging out on the black cat's left side of the chest should be lowered.

But don't give up. You are a great young artist. In the future, your art will be hanged up in museums. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>