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Blackclaw X Rigidedge by SimplyMisty Blackclaw X Rigidedge by SimplyMisty
Point commission for =MisterTwister123
Also a remake of:
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Ugggh my mouse jacked up during this.

Whelp, this took a while o_o
From 9:00 to about 12:00

Oh, also, I tried a knew shading technique. Let me know how you like it.

Hope you like it Twister and Blackout. Please comment before fav-ing.
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Characters: Rigidedge =MisterTwister123 Blackclaw =Blackclawxx
Artist: Me
Made with sumofm
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Critique by xXIndigosplashXx Feb 18, 2013, 11:24:10 AM
So, first I'll start with Blackclaw. I love the eyes, and the way she is looking at Twister. So cute. ;A; Then, her head is shaped very well, except on the left side it looks a little smaller. I love the way you did the shading on her, except its a little smeared, maybe? And I noticed that the right shoulder is down a little bit further. Other than that, you did awesome on her. I love how you did her ears, and her smile. It's beautiful. Now, for Rigidedge. You did a beautiful job on it, I love the pose. The head is shaped PERFECT, and the bangs are very well done. I love the expression, it's just epic. But, the mouth isn't very noticable..Other than that, I think you did a good job on it. <3

SO. AWESOME. MISTY. :D
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Critique by xFascinatingfiresx Feb 18, 2013, 11:43:03 AM
Man you are so good!
First off, I'd like to say amazing job! First, I would like to begin with the positives.
Positives:
I love how they're standing! And the ears are amazing! I totally fail at drawing ears.. .a. And the eyes, I think that is your best job on your drawings. You make the eyes look so great! And I love the detail you put in your drawings! The shading is great, and I can tell you put alot of work into your drawings. I love watching you on LS, so I can someday learnt to be as great as you are! You got their colors perfect, and I love the blush ^^ So cute!
Now, for the negatives (I'm nice with this xD):
First, I would like to point out Blackout. I think that you made her shoulder a little too low. If you look at Rigid, you can see his shoulder is up to his head. Now when you look at Black, her shoulder looks a little more low then it needs to be. And if you look at they're shading, I think you went a little too much on it (No offence, because it's not like I can do it as good as you can). I think maybe you should blur it a little more to make it look a little more realistic. And also with Blackie's shading, I think you should do kinda what you did when you started on her neck, and then do the same on her shoulder.
Now, for my ratings.
Vision: I can see how you drew this, and it looks great! I think only Black's shoulder is a little too low. Overall, I see it as wonderful!
Originality: I think the way they look is pretty original, and I love how Rigid is looking! They both look great!
Technique: I think the only thing that may need more work is the way Blackie's shoulder was at. I think you should at least draw it kinda like Rigid's was drawn, near his head. Or, maybe you can draw her shoulder under her fur. Also, I think you should do what you did when you started with Black's neck for shading, then do the same down the shoulder to make it look pretty realistic.
Impact: I am really impressed with this! I wish I could draw as good as you.. D: My sumo.fm doesn't have all the features yours does :/ But, this is still a great drawing! It makes me reflect on how I draw, and how much I wish I could draw as good as you!
*Sorry for such the long critique :/ I had alot to say I guess xD So, I hope you read my critique!*
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Amybear8 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
This is not a professional critique but this picture is so cute! Amazing really amazing X3
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SimplyMisty Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you <3
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Amybear8 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Np! ^_^
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x-WlLD Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Student General Artist
I love how you do the blushes xD
SUPER CUTE
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SimplyMisty Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you <3
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x-WlLD Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Student General Artist
Np!
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Iceclaw-12 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013
epic i got nothing else to say but : OMG OMG OMG I LOVE IT I WISH I WAS THIS AWESOME AT DRAWING ; ; JELLY BELLY random
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SimplyMisty Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you xD
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Iceclaw-12 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013
np xD
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cresentsky Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Cute! :)
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SimplyMisty Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ty!
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cresentsky Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Yw!
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x-ForeverSilent-x Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Sorry I didn't comment before fav-ing o.o. I was in a rush whenever I added it to my favorites... It was hailing here earlier, along with raining, so.. I saw it and quickly fav-ed it. xD
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SimplyMisty Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
xD it's fine.
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x-ForeverSilent-x Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Okay xD

By the way, this is amazing.
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SimplyMisty Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks c:
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x-ForeverSilent-x Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Welcomes. And, Happy birthday. o:.

Ivanna draw you for a present. :D? Can you give me a reff link and a pose you'd like?
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SimplyMisty Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
sure c: Its in "rc ppl" folder
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x-ForeverSilent-x Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Okay. A pose? :D?
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SimplyMisty Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
anyone u want xD
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Sunfeather30 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013
Woah man o_o
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Woah.
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SimplyMisty Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD
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Sunfeather30 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013
THERES A BTTLE WTF o_o..
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:iconsimplymisty:
SimplyMisty Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
what?
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Sunfeather30 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013
Amberstar, (Icestar) Attacked, and only a few people were on.
But she fled when everyone else came on -.-
We need to start training..
I mean, I don't want to get banned, but I have an account to fight on if I do fight.
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SimplyMisty Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I agree
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Sunfeather30 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013
Btw, HAPPY BIRTHDAY MISTY C:!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I remember when you were just a little fluffy soup..
(I don't because when I was a kit you were still leader...Ohwell..)
Your fur would fly in the wind as you ran to china, going to get my llamas..
Now you're such a big soup, leading RIverclan, and getting herds of llamas...
Happy Birthday Purple fluffy soupC:
-Gives present-
-Insideboxismatefinder.co-
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SimplyMisty Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ty c:
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Featherpath Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Student Interface Designer
:iconepicclapplz: Bravo! Bravo! Bravo!!! I love this! If I was awesome enough to right a critique, I would, but not today. I seriously love this! It's like magic :iconmagic-plz:... Of course, it isn't it's.........................POWERS. :iconrainbowdashswagplz:
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SimplyMisty Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ty so much! xD
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Featherpath Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Student Interface Designer
Omg, You're Welcome!!! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
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Shadowstripe1 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013
I faved b4 commenting
I'm so evil :iconnyanportal1plz::iconnyanportal2plz::iconnyanportal1plz::iconnyanportal2plz: :dummy:
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SimplyMisty Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
>:c xD
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Shadowstripe1 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013
Muahahahah c:< :iconstalkingplz:
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x-Rigidedge-x Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013
Oh my god this is amazing Misty. Thank you so much :3
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SimplyMisty Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ty, I'm glad you like it c:
Np~
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sunnypatch123 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013
Misty this is so amazing, unless your me eating spidereyes and drinking buckfizz (orange juice and chanpaigne :3 its ncie)
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SimplyMisty Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lol
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xXIceblastofRCXx Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Forever Alone.Haha, Anyway, Lovveee it.
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SimplyMisty Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ty c:
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xXIceblastofRCXx Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Student Digital Artist
You're welcome. :3
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eagletalon56 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is epic.
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SimplyMisty Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ty
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Icyfossil Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That's more than a new style of shading...

Really nice :3
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SimplyMisty Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ty c:
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xXIndigosplashXx Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013
Omg, beautiful
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SimplyMisty Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks.
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