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Misty meet Misty: 400+ watchers drawing

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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
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:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

I understand this was on a different paint tool, right? However this is a critique and I will critique my best.

First of all, the anatomy I'm sorry to say is WAY off. I personally don't use anatomy in my drawings, but I know you do. The paws are really awkward looking. Mistystar ( left ) kind of looks like she's standing up like a human, otherwise her belly wouldn't dip so low. At least, compared to her right arm. It would be a little too short.

Mistystar ( right ) looks better. Her paw is more off than the other, but the others things seem to be well. If you look from her ear down, her back looks kind of straight, and to me it looks a bit off. I agree that there is room for improvement in this picture. It doesn't really look like your normal work.